Wednesday, December 20, 2006
My first diving trip
My first diving trip was not at all what I expected. Some of my friends and I packed our car Friday night and drove 2 hours to a famous diving place in south Taiwan ~ Kengting. It's a nice beach but I didn't have good time at that time. One of my friend is a diving coach he try to teach me how to diving even I can't swimming. I was aspire after under the sea for a long time, and that just a good chance for reach my dream. I thought it could be easy when if somebody can teach me, but it was too difficult for me. Because I'm not ever to conquered my fear of water. So, in the end I only can carry the heavy and expensive diving accouterment waited on the beach. I was so disappointed of myself, but I'm sure I would like to try again soon or later.
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Kengting-->kenting
One of my friend-->one of my friends
One of my friend is a diving coach he try to teach me how to diving even I can't swimming.
-->run-on sentence-->break the sentence into two.
-->even though I can't even swim.
I was aspire after under the sea for a long time, and that just a good chance for reach my dream.
-->was aspire?
I thought it could be easy when if somebody can teach me, but it was too difficult for me.
-->delete 'when'
Because I'm not ever to conquered my fear of water.
-->'Because...' is not a complete sentence.
-->It is too difficult for me becuase I can't not even conquer...
So, in the end I only can carry the heavy and expensive diving accouterment waited on the beach.
-->..., waiting on the beach.
I was so disappointed of myself, but I'm sure I would like to try again soon or later.
-->try it again...
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